Analysis of When you go Away

Ella Wheeler Wilcox 1855 (Janesville) – 1919



When you go away, my friend,
When you say your last good-bye,
Then the summer time will end,
And the winter will be nigh.

Though the green grass decks the heather,
And the birds sing all the day,
There will be no summer weather
After you have gone away.

When I look into your eyes,
I shall thrill with deepest pain,
Thinking that beneath the skies
I may never look again.

You will feel a moment's sorrow,
I shall feel a lasting grief;
You forgetting on the morrow,
I to mourn with no relief.

When we say the last sad word,
And you are no longer near,
And the winds and all the birds
Cannot keep the summer here,

Life will lose its full completeness---
Lose it not for you, but me;
All the beauty and the sweetness
Each can hold, I shall not see.


Scheme ABAB CDCD EXEX FGFG XXXX HIHI
Poetic Form Quatrain  (67%)
Metre 1110111 1111111 1010111 0010111 10111010 0011101 11111010 1011101 1110111 1111101 1010101 1110101 11101010 1110101 10101010 1111101 1110111 0111101 0010101 1010101 11111010 1111111 10100010 1111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 748
Words 147
Sentences 6
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 96
Words per stanza (avg) 24
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on April 03, 2023

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Ella Wheeler Wilcox

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