Analysis of Unnoticed To Be Noticed
Lawrence S. Pertillar 1947 (Connecticut)
Whatever you believe,
You had been attempting to achieve.
All these many years.
With a doing to waste your time.
To accomplish nothing to claim,
An obtaining of success.
No one knew a fool like you,
Could ever do.
No matter how many lifetimes,
You live to get.
Wasting valuable time.
Doing such foolishness.
We...
Will still ignore,
Your efforts to endeavor.
Whatever it is fools do to wish.
Even if the impossibility of that,
Should ever happen.
For anyone to discover or mention it!
'Wow.
Now...
That difference,
You expect me to anticipate and notice?
Would be...
What?
Will I be given a clue or a hint?
Or...
Should I await patiently?
To recognize and believe,
Your ignoring me is different.
Than what has been done before.
Until that achievement reached...
Impossible for me to seek.
Has been successfully ignored.
When and if I am blessed to get done.
Please, by all means,
Keep me posted, will you?
I would hate to be ignored or miss this.
Without being notified and told about it!
Scheme | AAXBXXCCXXBD EFXXXGH IIXDEXXFEAXFXXXG XCXH |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 10101 111010101 11101 10101111 10101011 1010101 1110111 1101 1101101 1111 101001 101100 1 1101 1101010 10111111 10100010011 11010 11010101101 1 1 1100 10111010010 11 1 1111001101 1 1101100 110001 101011100 1111101 0110101 01001111 11010001 101111111 1111 111011 1111101111 01101001011 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 950 |
Words | 175 |
Sentences | 30 |
Stanzas | 4 |
Stanza Lengths | 12, 7, 16, 4 |
Lines Amount | 39 |
Letters per line (avg) | 20 |
Words per line (avg) | 4 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 191 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 44 |
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