Analysis of Writing



I sit,I think, my words gathered in order stink!
Maybe I should seek a shrink or create a lie to sell a link?
It comes to others so easily it seems to me words are like a dream!!!
I want the best lines to appear to my reader ahhhh my mind is on that hummingbirds feeder!!
So much beauty, so much in a day, I can’t really think of nothing to say!!!
My minds racing now, but still I cuss out loud; looking for sweet droppings of nothings to speak to my crowd!!!
…So still I sit & still I think man just call it writers block inc.!!!!


Scheme AABCDEA
Poetic Form
Metre 11111100101 1011101101011101 111101100111111101 1101110111101111111010 1110110011110111011 1110111111110111011011111 111111111111011
Characters 538
Words 109
Sentences 7
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 7
Lines Amount 7
Letters per line (avg) 57
Words per line (avg) 15
Letters per stanza (avg) 399
Words per stanza (avg) 108

About this poem

Writers Block

Font size:
 

Written on September 16, 2021

Submitted by Ghat1980 on September 16, 2021

Modified on April 28, 2023

32 sec read
138

Gabriel Hatfield

In 2001 I put 3 poems in a Rolling Stones magazine contest made the top 25 and was published but I was incarcerated and never was settled to care where but older now I think I’m ready to write more. more…

All Gabriel Hatfield poems | Gabriel Hatfield Books

1 fan

Discuss this Gabriel Hatfield poem analysis with the community:

0 Comments

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem analysis to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "Writing" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 26 May 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem-analysis/109708/writing>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    More poems by

    Gabriel Hatfield

    »

    May 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    5
    days
    13
    hours
    38
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Browse Poetry.com

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    The author of a poem is called ______.
    A Poet
    B Writer
    C Author
    D Speaker