Analysis of Ceaseless Guilt

Aiman Bukhari 2001 (Srinagar)



I don't know what?
But it is real and permanent
It hurts me,it burns me from inside
This is something I can't explain
The words can't describe this pain
Can i kill myself?
Without hurting anyone
Will they let me leave this place?
Without bringing me the weight of guilt
Can i survive the feeling of guilt?
Or am i going to carry it with me?
I have suffered enough in this world
Is it going to be same or worse there?
Is there anyone else like me?
Who have been there
Can you tell me what it is like?
To be happy and peaceful all the time
But can i handle this peacefulness and  hapiness?
Or is it going to hurt me like everything?


Scheme ABCDDEFGHHIJKIKLMGN
Poetic Form
Metre 1111 11110100 11111101 11101101 0110111 1111 011010 1111111 011010111 110101011 11110110111 111001011 1110111111 1110111 1111 11111111 1110010101 11110110001 11110111110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 614
Words 126
Sentences 10
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 19
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 491
Words per stanza (avg) 126

About this poem

This poem talks about a person who us depressed and wants to kill himself/herself but is afraid because of the guilt he/she has to carry with herself/himself.

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Written on September 13, 2021

Submitted by cyedaiman on September 14, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Aiman Bukhari

Hey!My name is Aiman Bukhari.I am a 19 year old girl battling with Depression and these poems are just the glimpses of my thoughts and feelings.Hope you all will like it:) more…

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