Analysis of One Day As I Was Walking



One day as I was walking, I heard someone talking.

So I turn to look and before my eyes
I saw a tall brown haired man.

He took me by the hand and said that he was my friend.

He told me to keep walking
Until I see the light shining bright.

When I saw the light shining bright
I knew I was going in the right direction.

As I thought about what Jesus had said,
I looked up and he had disappeared.

I started my journey remembering the words that were said by this wonderful great man.

Then finally I came upon the light that was shining bright.

My eyes could see more clearly about the things in front of me which is so dear to me and the love that holds deep down in my heart for everyone near.

For it was my Jesus which brought me here.


Scheme A XB X AC CX XX B C X X
Poetic Form
Metre 111111011110 1111100111 1101111 1111010111111 1111110 011101101 11101101 111110001010 1110111011 11101101 1101100100011011110011 110011010111101 11111100101011111111100111110111101 1111101111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 721
Words 150
Sentences 10
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 1, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 41
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 57
Words per stanza (avg) 15

About this poem

Linda Barker, then Linda Edwards (born Linda Delores Long) is a poet who's works were published by Poetry.com in a book titled "Windows of Perception" in the early 2000's.

Font size:
 

Written on 2000

Submitted on September 06, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

45 sec read
87

Linda Delores Long Barker

Linda Barker is a poet from the Echota Cherokee Tribe. She is from the Wolf Clan. She is the seventh great-grand-daughter of Chief Attakullakulla. She began writing poetry in the 1990's and began publishing them in the early 2000's. Linda is the mother of actor/musician Lil Cory. more…

All Linda Delores Long Barker poems | Linda Delores Long Barker Books

0 fans

Discuss this Linda Delores Long Barker poem analysis with the community:

0 Comments

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem analysis to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "One Day As I Was Walking" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 21 May 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem-analysis/108810/one-day-as-i-was-walking>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    May 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    10
    days
    18
    hours
    15
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Browse Poetry.com

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    AA Milne wrote: "A bear, however hard he tries..."
    A "has very very tired eyes"
    B "can never stop telling lies"
    C "grows tubby with no exercise"
    D "stinks and attracts the flies"