Analysis of Heaven's Vacation
Dear God I walk through a vacation, I walk through
With you, I shall walk through with you
This story book will never come to an end
This part will someday, some day
When I walk your way.
Your way down Angels Street
So sweet shall that path be
When we meet down Heavens glaze
Shall amaze as I meet your son
I shall run down Heavens path at last, at last.
I wait my place, as I learn I yearn,
Yearn for God, and Jesus hand
For that was the plan to take me there
To share eternal life
No more strife, no more pain
No more shame, lions tamed.
Dear God I shall take that place
Amongst Lilies Way to play
For ever more on Heavens Shore
Lions won’t roar only wait for me
To lay and see a forever blue sky
Not even an angel shall fly
Just God, Jesus, and I way up high.
Rivers that go on for ever more
They shall be of the baby blueish delight
In Heavens sight no other, but I
In God, and Jesus land up high
I fly, I fly, I shall in my mind fly
In heaven’s eternal high.
Scheme | AAXBB XCXXX XXXXXX XBDCEEE DXEEEE |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 111110010111 11111111 11011101111 111111 11111 111101 111111 1111101 10111111 11111011111 111111111 1110101 111011111 110101 111111 111101 1111111 0110111 11011101 101110111 1101001011 11011011 111001111 101111101 11110101001 010111011 01010111 1111110111 0100101 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 942 |
Words | 201 |
Sentences | 5 |
Stanzas | 5 |
Stanza Lengths | 5, 5, 6, 7, 6 |
Lines Amount | 29 |
Letters per line (avg) | 26 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 148 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 40 |
About this poem
This poem comes from a christian manuscript I am writing.
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Written on February 27, 2021
Submitted by marsbar007 on September 06, 2021
Modified on March 05, 2023
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