Analysis of Evening sky
Are you the one for me?
I wait the entire day
When I can be with you;
Hurriedly i finish chores
Rushing to meet you
How do i gauge your mood?
Each day is a different scene;
Though it's not my fault,
Oft you tend to be mean.
But....
I love it when you are clear
White and bright and sunny;
I love it when you are blue
Giving me, of your mind, no clue;
I don't mind when you are angry
Red and pink - a theophany
I don't mind when you are heavy
Greys and black are many
This evening you confuse me,
Jumping moods every minute;
U show me grey, red and blue
What should I, of you, construe!!!
#musingsby Sharmila
#eveningsky
#picinspired
Scheme | A BCXC XDXD EXACC ADAA AECC XXB |
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Poetic Form | Tetractys (20%) |
Metre | 110111 1100101 111111 1001101 10111 111111 11101001 11111 111111 1 1111111 101010 1111111 10111111 11111110 10101 11111110 101110 1101011 10110010 1111101 1111101 11 1 1 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 608 |
Words | 126 |
Sentences | 6 |
Stanzas | 7 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 4, 4, 5, 4, 4, 3 |
Lines Amount | 25 |
Letters per line (avg) | 19 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 68 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 18 |
About this poem
I wrote these lines after my usual walk in the evenings on my terrace. The myriad hues that the weather changes created was the inspiration. Hope you enjoy reading this as much as I did penning it....
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Written on November 23, 2020
Submitted by Sharam on September 05, 2021
Modified on March 05, 2023
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