Analysis of Deja vu

Laela mj 2003 (Batang)



Have you beside me
Make me feel i'm hoolding
The entire whole world
with a big and wide barier
secret and the truth
We close but i feel distance
Your eyes keep look back forward
about her eyes
Even though i try so hard
Embrace everything that reuse, with all
story and memories that you share
Before I please my shoulder to keep
Never be the same like it was, you make it
clear when I used the red dress and
say I look like her
It make me realized, should I let you
tell another word or sour joke
Should i let you make my night
full with compare feels and insecurity?
It doesn't worth I think


Scheme ABCDEFGHIJDKLMDNBOAB
Poetic Form Etheree  (25%)
Metre 11011 11111 001011 101011 10001 1111110 1111110 0101 1011111 011010111 100100111 011111011 10101111111 11110110 11110 111101111 101011101 1111111 1101100100 110111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 581
Words 118
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 469
Words per stanza (avg) 118

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When ex become so precious after break up

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Written on February 09, 2021

Submitted by Elrose_ on September 04, 2021

Modified on March 18, 2023

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