Analysis of My heaven

Paul Weaver 1964 (Virginia)



My heaven is the smile of my sweetheart.
The smell of pine trees when we are camping.
Holding my love in my arms as we gaze at stars.
Just knowing our love will stand strong.
My heaven is knowing my sweetheart loves me.
I love to hold her on cool autumn nights.
Our love will keep us from ever being apart.
I Love when the flowers are blooming.
And the birds are singing a long with the wind.
My heaven is living being in love.


Scheme ABCDEFABGH
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Etheree  (20%)
Metre 110101111 0111111110 101101111111 110101111 1101101111 1111011101 1011111101001 111010110 00111001101 1101101001
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 418
Words 85
Sentences 10
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 333
Words per stanza (avg) 85
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Submitted by Deaconkev on September 03, 2021

Modified on March 27, 2023

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