Analysis of Acting Like A Tree



When I got to the party and saw everybody
walking around in Christmas costumes,
I remembered I was supposed to be wearing one, too.
Bending slightly, I held out my hands
and waved them a little, wiggling my fingers.
I narrowed my eyes and pursed my lips, making
a tree face, and started slowly hopping on one foot,
then the other, the way I imagine trees do
in the forest when they're not being watched.
Maybe people would take me for a hemlock,

or a tamarack. A little girl disguised as an elf
looked at me skeptically. Oh, come on!
her expression said. You call that acting like a tree?
Behind her I could see a guy in a reindeer suit
sitting down at the piano. As he hit the opening
chords of "Joy to the World" I closed my eyes
and tried again. This time I could feel the wind
struggling to lift my boughs, which were heavy
with snow. I was clinging to a mountain crag
and could see over the tops of other trees a few late-

afternoon clouds and the thin red ribbon of a river.
I smelled more snow in the air. A gust or two whispered
around my neck and face, but by now
all I could hear was the meditative creaking
of this neighbor or that—and a moment later, farther off,
the faint but eager call of a wolf.


Scheme AXBXXCXBXX XXAXCXXACX XXXCXX
Poetic Form
Metre 111101001100 100101001 10101101111011 101011111 011010100110 11011011110 0110101010111 101001101011 0010111101 1010111101 101010101111 1111000111 0010111110101 010111010011 101100101110100 1111011111 01011111101 10011111010 11111010101 01110011101011 0110011101010 1111001011110 011101111 11111010010 111011001010101 011101101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,198
Words 237
Sentences 14
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 10, 10, 6
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 37
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 317
Words per stanza (avg) 79
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Submitted by Nazetel on September 01, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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