Analysis of THANKS FOR THE WORLD
Thanks for the world
For all that it's worth,
It's rotten through and through
It's entire girth.
Thanks for the planet
It isn't worth a damn,
But thanks all the same
For all that I am.
Thanks for the wishes
I know you mean well,
Girl I'm so glad to hear
That you're doing swell.
Thanks for the words
Only spoken in jest,
I know that you mean me
All the very best.
Yes, thanks for the heartaches
That you're sending my way
Now that our love is over
What more can I say?
Thanks for broken promises
All the lying that hurts,
I know that your own neck
Must always come first.
Thanks for the build-up
That the boss men ignore,
Thanks for the sleeping mat
Left outside your door.
Thanks for the heartaches
And thanks for all the pain,
I still cry for your love
But I'm crying in vain.
Thanks for the misery
And thanks for all the tears,
I longed for your body
But you wouldn't let me near.
THE END
© Copyright 2021, Philip Roberts
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia
Scheme | XAXA XBXBCDXD XEFECGXG XHXXXIXI CJXJFXFX XHX |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1101 11111 110101 10101 11010 110101 11101 11111 11010 11111 111111 11101 1101 101001 111111 10101 11101 111011 11101110 11111 1110100 101011 111111 1111 11011 101101 110101 11111 1101 011101 111111 111001 110100 011101 111110 1110111 01 101010 100100010 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 918 |
Words | 183 |
Sentences | 10 |
Stanzas | 6 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 8, 8, 8, 8, 3 |
Lines Amount | 39 |
Letters per line (avg) | 19 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 124 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 31 |
About this poem
Back in the mid-1970s, it was trendy to say, "Thanks for the world," rather than hello, or goodbye. I saw nothing to be thankful about, so in 1977 I wrote this verse. Possibly more of a song lyric than a poem.
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Written on 1977
Submitted by PHIL_ROBERTS on August 28, 2021
Modified on March 05, 2023
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