Analysis of My God Moves...

Gregg E Umipeg II 1968 (California)



My God moves
mountains,
Creates universes
Saves worlds
and
loves me enough
to
die on a tree.
I move
myself
Create messes
Save nothing
and
God still loves me.


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Poetic Form
Metre 111 10 01100 11 0 1101 1 1101 11 1 0110 110 0 1111
Characters 157
Words 29
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 14
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 9
Words per line (avg) 2
Letters per stanza (avg) 126
Words per stanza (avg) 29

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I wrote this poem several years ago after going through some tough times. It was submitted in the original Poetry.com circa 2006-2008

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Gregg E Umipeg II

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