Analysis of The 11th Commandment (Thou Shalt Not Commit The Sin Of Political Correctness)
“Thou shalt not commit the sin of political correctness”
Should be a new commandment,
Avoid the sins of the politicians
Whose morals are sorely rent.
Don’t blaspheme against the righteous
Don’t blaspheme against the truth,
Abandon political correct lies
And always demand proof.
Thou shalt not believe the lies
Of those without a soul,
Always fight the politically correct
Who wrongly are in control.
Thou shalt not commit the heresy
Of telling political correct lies,
Thou shalt not support the fiends
Who wish to make democracy die.
The 11th Commandment clearly states
You have a right to an open mind,
You must not support the mind controllers
Or any of their evil kind.
You must be able to think for yourself
And fight against mind control,
Fight the politically correct demons
Who only have one goal:
Their goal is to stamp out the truth
And to victimise the innocent,
That’s why, “Thou shalt not commit
the sin of political correctness”
Is writ as the 11th Commandment.
THE END
© Copyright 2021 Philip Roberts
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia
Scheme | ABCX ADEX EFXF XEXX XGXG XFCF DBXAB XXX |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 111010110100010 1101010 010110010 1101101 1101010 110101 0100100011 01011 1110101 110101 1100100001 1101001 111010100 1100100011 1110101 111101001 011010101 110111101 1110101010 11011101 1111011101 0101101 10010000110 110111 11111101 0110100 1111101 0110100010 111011010 01 101010 100100010 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 1,030 |
Words | 176 |
Sentences | 7 |
Stanzas | 8 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 5, 3 |
Lines Amount | 32 |
Letters per line (avg) | 26 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 106 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 22 |
About this poem
No blasphemy is intended in this poem. After writing it though, a friend pointed out that this is covered by the 7th commandment anyway: Thou Shalt Not Bear False Witness! Now I come to think of it, it really is the same thing, since political correctness is all about lying and never telling the truth!
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Written on September 30, 2008
Submitted by PHIL_ROBERTS on August 13, 2021
Modified on March 05, 2023
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