Analysis of Commodore of Clay

Sam madeyin 1991 (Ogun States)



Higher than anyone of us
A humble creature arrayed than eternal angel
His maker divineed head
Looks a way like him, behold and laud his glory
Although he suffers as we suffered and bleed like us do bled
Has five senses like we do not,
So endowed with so many a lot.
Call to name a nomenclatures and the unknown
By his creator God wisdom.
Though made him a Eden kingdom
Never shall he suffer loss
Gave He him a wife and her name was Eve
Naked they were. Shamed covered with sewn fig leave.
He gone against his creator Almighty bsguiled of ordinary animal.


Scheme ABCDCEEFGGHIIB
Poetic Form
Metre 1011011 0101001101010 11011 101110101110 11101110011111 11101111 101111001 111010001 11010110 11101010 1011101 1110100111 10101101111 1101101001011100100
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 543
Words 105
Sentences 5
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 14
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 443
Words per stanza (avg) 105

About this poem

theme of creation is hidden-opened here. Poet Emphasized and took his pens on and on Adam at the first creature before the crafted-in sin through a snakes (satan) beguilement.

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Written on August 10, 2021

Submitted by Madeyin'sPetry on August 10, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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