Analysis of Night bird (sonnet)

Jose Lopez 1971 (San Juan)



Dark awaited for a walk unsuspected
Chirp emerged of a place filtered
Bang sounded the mystery unexpected
Water flows like just a drop altered

Night bird seamed hanging untouched
Model unchained want to gain the focus
Truely act of the animal not touched
Mere behavior the human was rocus

Night bird came to blurr the image
None would've known the attitude
Just passed it away the raw pomage

Night bird was the open raw passage
To brought out mistaken altitude
Finally granted dismissed massage

Jose Luis López
Puerto Rico


Scheme ABAB CDCD EFE EFX XX
Poetic Form
Metre 1010101010 10110110 1100100010 101110110 1111001 101111010 111010011 101001011 11111010 1101010 11101011 111010110 11101010 100100101 10111 110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 508
Words 89
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 3, 3, 2
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 86
Words per stanza (avg) 18

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Written on June 10, 2021

Submitted by poetacristo47 on August 07, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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