Analysis of Me and You

Yogita Yamini 1975 (Patna)



Me and you, in the world of our own..
Mother and daughter with a very different tone...
While many may say you are my clone,
In all your full fragnance you stand out alone..

Me and you in the world of our own..
Sisters, the sinisters together we've grown,
In joy and in sorrow ,you've been my backbone..
In every situation you've been my drone,
Watching over me from your own created zone...

Me and you in the world of our own..
Parents ,my carers ..you've stood tall and high,
In a light overtone you have always shown,
That I am a gem who should always be shone..
For her exqusitiveness and talents overgrown..

Me and you in the world of our own..
My mate, my partner, my consort in crime,
With you around I never feel lone..
From being unknown to known,
Over a period of time our love has only grown..


Scheme Aaaa Aaaaa Axaaa Axaaa
Poetic Form
Metre 1010011101 1001010101001 110111111 0111111101 1010011101 100101011 0100101111 01000101111 101011110101 1010011101 101111101 001101111 1110111111 10101001 1010011101 1111010101 110111011 1100111 100100111011101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 786
Words 153
Sentences 13
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 5, 5, 5
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 152
Words per stanza (avg) 38

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Written on July 18, 2021

Submitted by yogitayamini on July 18, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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