Analysis of The better me



As i age, i can recall
The mistakes and all the games i played.
Now im at mid-life
Troubles come and go
I bow my head
To a higher power
Just to let the troubles flow
Away on an ocean wave
Im no longer a slave
To the mentality
That corrupted me
Im off to a better me!


Scheme ABCDEFDGGHHH
Poetic Form
Metre 111111 001010111 11111 10101 1111 101010 1110101 0111101 111001 100100 10101 1110101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 255
Words 58
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 205
Words per stanza (avg) 58

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Submitted by Princess98 on July 17, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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