Analysis of MY LOVE



You are a queen and that is how you should be treated
My love for you will never be defeated.
If you fall, I will be the one to pick you up,
Your innocence I hope to never corrupt.

I offer protection for your mind, body, and soul,
I will be there till death takes his toll.
Together we will take on all of your fears,
When you cry I’ll be the one to wipe your tears.

You deserve much more than I could give,
But I’ll do the best I can for as long as I live.
I will not lie, but we will have heart breaking battles,
But my arms will always be your castle.

I can’t offer you a bed of roses,
But I will always be the one to hold you the closest.


Scheme AAXX BBXX XXXX XX
Poetic Form
Metre 1101011111110 11111101010 111111011111 11001111001 1100101111001 111111111 01011111111 11111011111 101111111 1110111111111 1111111111010 111111110 1110101110 1111101111010
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 636
Words 137
Sentences 7
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 2
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 122
Words per stanza (avg) 34

About this poem

FIRST POEM I EVER WROTE AND WAS BRAVE ENOUGH TO LET PEOPLE SEE. I HOPE YOU ENJOY THANK YOU.

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Written on July 15, 2021

Submitted by bookwyrm316 on July 15, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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