Analysis of THE MISTS OF TIME



What of your life
Is it merely borrowed,
From the mists of time?
Is your existence
Merely a rapidly fading dream?
As I know surely is mine.

I often stop to meditate
On the meaning of life,
The meaning of reality.
Is living so simple
Or so very complicated,
As we make it out to be?

Is the borrowed time
Slowly running out for us,
Is life about to fade?
Shall we live another day,
Another month, another year,
Or even a decade?

Misty dreams control our hopes
Our dreams, our every thought,
Our every notion.
The sands of time
Control the way we act and move,
Our every motion.

Living has become
A mere day to day thing,
We eke out our days without fuss.
The mists of time
Are now fading fast,
Death is calling now to us.

THE END
© Copyright 2021 Philip Roberts
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia


Scheme AXBXXX XACXXC BDEXXE XXFBXF XXDBXD XXX
Poetic Form
Metre 1111 11101 10111 11010 100100101 1111011 1101110 101011 010110 110110 1110100 1111111 1011 1010111 110111 1110101 01010101 110001 10101101 101101001 1010010 0111 01011101 1010010 10101 011111 111101011 0111 11101 1110111 01 101010 100100010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 760
Words 150
Sentences 12
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 6, 6, 6, 3
Lines Amount 33
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 103
Words per stanza (avg) 25

About this poem

Another of my ancient philosophical poems. This time from c. 1976.

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Written on 1976

Submitted by PHIL_ROBERTS on July 14, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Phil Roberts

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