Analysis of Keep walking

Aaradhya Dahal 2004 (Kathmandu)



Black day sparkling around the hill,
Gotta climb soon from underneath the lean,
Correction when something goes wrong,
Rather than to just turn and move on,

Two pupils to zoom in the sun,
Two hands to let you get your work done,
A smile to enhance the working rate,
Few steps to swap up your cruel fate,

Focus and focus on your adjusting sights,
Keep on praying on your mighty delights,
Whisper out your deem hide and seek
Sinking deeper to the clouds of your peak,

White pearls floating up the hell,
Just remember the games you tend to fail,
Got trapped inside your kingdom cage ?
Remember that your wounds are what made you pretty savage..


Scheme XXXX AABB CCDD XXXX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (50%)
Metre 11100101 101110101 01011011 101111011 11011001 111111111 011010101 111111101 10010110101 1110111001 10111101 1010101111 1110101 1010011111 11011101 01011111111010
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 625
Words 116
Sentences 2
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 127
Words per stanza (avg) 29

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It's a small compilation of words that might help to restart us to keep on walking.

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Submitted by Aaradhya on July 08, 2021

Modified by Aaradhya on July 08, 2021

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