Analysis of Who is she



Who is she?? Where did she came from?? she comes, she's so quite, she talks, she smile and I'm hypnotize and mesmerize-spellbind.. A big part of me feels vigorous and lively..
                     Her blueprint has no blueprint.. She's one of a kind like the moon in the dark skies.. In the day time she's bright, mirrorlike, sparkling like diamonds and DOMAINE de la ROMANEE CONTI WINE.. SHE HUMBLES THE BEAST INSIDE.. I feel beautiful inside when she's near by!! I feel anxieties when she's close by. Worried about what I may say like a kid meeting his star for the first time.. I'm star struck..
                    Who is she?? Her beauty is pleasing to my eyes and soul!! She's short in frame, but in my mind she's as tall as king kong and I'm the blond in caged in his palms.. Her qualities and grace can attract a blind man.. She is the origin point in my time and place.. The source and outlet of life itself.. She is the beginning, the rise, the start of a foundation rooted in, loyalty, trust, and honor.. Her lineage and heritage is birth from mother earth..
                   Soft she looks, smooth to the touch.. Velvet, silky delicate to the touch.. God, I wish I could touch!! Her skin ain't thin, but thick.. She is well rounded and her circumference is thick.. I know she could keep the beast on the straight and narrow, like a arrow shot from a native's bow and arrow..
                  I'm a KING walking LIONS, feasting on fake ass kings and lions.. I'm eating religious meal; banquets along two LIONS.. Be my earth on GOD'S green earth.. Let's lay a foundation on intellectual basis.. Let love and understanding be are framework from the ground-up.. Using loyalty as are scaffold beams.. we are two beings that could be one being.. Two personalities existing in one fundamental life source..

WHO IS SHE!!

BY:LUIS ENRIQUE BELTRAN-VELEZ
                                                                                        12/2/2020


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Characters 1,994
Words 322
Sentences 36
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 5, 1, 2
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 170
Words per line (avg) 40
Letters per stanza (avg) 453
Words per stanza (avg) 107

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About a beautiful woman that has captured my inner most thoughts and fellings.

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Written on December 02, 2020

Submitted by KIKEWEST on July 07, 2021

Modified by KIKEWEST on July 07, 2021

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