Analysis of Moments in my mind

carol smith sabry 1969 (montana)



I spend my time replaying our moments in my mind
rather good or bad these moments rewind
i,d rather spend time remembering ,my moments with you
than thinking about my future moments without you
these moments form a bridge from your side to mine
at this moment i know that ill cherish all of our moments
                            for all time


Scheme AABBCDE
Poetic Form
Metre 11110101010011 1011111010 11011010011011 1100111010011 11010111111 1110111110111010 111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 338
Words 60
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 7
Lines Amount 7
Letters per line (avg) 36
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 255
Words per stanza (avg) 59

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i wrote this about my x husband

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Submitted by sunshine9069 on June 20, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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