Analysis of Him



His kiss lit my soul on fire..
His eyes held oceans of sadness, love..pain..desire.

His hesitation confessed something pure..
His heart is held captive..afraid to hurt once more.

His touch was unbearably magnificent..magic

His voice as he said goodbye..beautifully tragic.


Scheme AA XX B B
Poetic Form
Metre 11111110 111101101 101001101 111111111 11101001 11111110
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 268
Words 45
Sentences 10
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 1, 1
Lines Amount 6
Letters per line (avg) 36
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 54
Words per stanza (avg) 10

About this poem

This is about falling in love with an emotionally unavailable man.

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Submitted by mindymooney1978 on June 09, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Mindy L. Mooney

My name is Mindy, i am 42 years old and am from NH. I am a very proud mother of three amazing young Men. I have always found so much peace in writing, whether its poetry, short stories, or even just random thoughts. Its a great coping skill for me as well. more…

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