Analysis of A lovely story to tell



A LOVELY STORY TO TELL

WE STARTED OUT ON A LONG
LONG TRIP, 2100 MILES, MY
LITTLE SISTER IN LAW AND
HER MOTHER WAS GOING WITH
US, MY LITTLE SISTER IN LAW
SAID, CAN I SIT IN THE BACK
WITH MY FEET HANGING OUT?

HER MOM SAID NO- NO MY DEAR
WE’VE A LONG- LONG WAY TO
GO. SHE TOOK THAT NOT THINKING
JUST HOW FAR IT WAS. SHE WAS
GETTING REALLY TIRED ABOUT
100 MILES AHEAD.

SHE SAID I WANT SOMETHING TO
EAT ARE WE THERE YET? BY THE
TIME WE GOT TO CALIFORNIA SHE
WAS SAYING I WANT TO GO BACK
HOME AND NEVER-EVER TAKE
A LONG TRIP LIKE THIS AGAIN
I DON’T LIKE TO ROAM.

IT WAS QUITE A WHILE BEFORE WE
WENT BACK HOME. I’M AFRAID SHE
LEARNED QUITE WELL HOW TO ROAM
BEFORE WE GOT BACK HOME

April 25, 2021

Author Clara Case ( Deen )


Scheme X XXXXXAB XCXXBX CXDAXXE DDEE X X
Poetic Form
Metre 0101011 1101101 1111 1010010 0101101 11101001 1111001 111101 0111111 101111 1111110 1111111 10101001 101 1111101 1111110 11110101 11011111 1010101 0111101 11111 11101011 1111011 111111 011111 10 101011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 698
Words 151
Sentences 8
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 1, 7, 6, 7, 4, 1, 1
Lines Amount 27
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 78
Words per stanza (avg) 22

About this poem

My hubby our children and I traveled all over the USA and this was one of the exciting ones.

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