Analysis of My Frozen Rose



It was the winter of suffering,  
As the frost clogged the hose,
It was not just the lucid water,
But even the sentiments froze.

Earlier autumn had fared no better,
Disease kept the mortals on their toes,
More were being lowered to rest,
While each bereaved masked his nose,

And the summer was equally harsh,
With everything being forced to close,
Hospitals and graveyards filled up fast,
While prisons received their regular dose.

And how was the promising spring ?
It would have brought hope, I suppose,
The tulips did bloom in the gardens,
But for the snaps, there was no one to pose.

And the previous year broke all records,
And rock bottom in history it goes,
The dwellers of the peaceful almond valley,
Were expertly hoodwinked by the foes.

The last three decades have been sinfully similar,
Terror perpetuated by the country of mangoes,
Absolute corrupted power wielded by tyrants,
But who is there to oppose ?

No one to hear the desperate pleas,
Your protests, poetry and prose,
All fall on the deaf ears,
As their saffron sun glows.

Every respite being nipped in the bud,  
Yet bravely staggering as the chilly wind blows,
As it dreams for the seasons of hope,
What chance is there for my frozen rose ?


Scheme ABCB CBXB XDXD ABXB XBXB CBXB XBXB XBXB
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 110101100 101101 111101010 11001001 1001011110 011010111 10101011 1101111 001011001 11010111 1001111 1100111001 01101001 11111101 010110010 1101111111 0010011101 0110010011 01010101010 01001101 01101111100 1001001010110 100101010110 1111101 11110101 1110001 111011 111011 10010101001 110100101011 111101011 111111101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,207
Words 211
Sentences 8
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 32
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 120
Words per stanza (avg) 27
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Submitted by Habib_Kashmiri on May 31, 2021

Modified on April 16, 2023

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