Analysis of Ups and Downs

Silvana Dureny 1976 (New Jersey)



I climb and then I fall
I grasp for LIFE and soon enough
I fall again..
Is it a challenge to see how many times I can handle this all
Is  this what happens when we keep grasping at what we can't have at all
I climb to the challenge then you drop the ball
Leaving me helpless  alone in sadness to carry me through this LIFE
But who would have thought I would be the one to take fall after fall
My strength became weakness
my tears became floods
My life became turmoil because I trusted you with my all
One day I Will Climb Tall 
But This Time I Won't  Fall
Any longer over you


Scheme ABCAAADAEFAAAG
Poetic Form
Metre 110111 11110101 1101 11010111101111011 11110111101111111 11101011101 10110010101101111 1111111101111101 110110 11011 11011011101111 111111 111111 1010101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 573
Words 117
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 14
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 451
Words per stanza (avg) 117
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Modified on March 05, 2023

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Silvana Dureny

44 year old mother or 5 college graduate BA Criminal Justice/criminology and Sociology Enjoys life with family and friends And helping others in need A mentor as well as a advocate always willing to open doors for those in need more…

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