Analysis of Empty Tent



You come on like a bureaucrat
Rearranging leaves on sidewalks
A windy megaphone neither
Espiritu nor vita vox
A thimble of salvation from
Our Lady of the Mother Goose
Drown babies in the baptismal
Mother Superior on the loose

The history of mystery
Says the victim must be willing
The blood of One is good for all
And yet the blood keeps spilling
Autonomy means I am free
Petition slain before the throne
Member of neither church nor sword
I must face the Judge alone

Bloody up the holy waters
Water down the holy blood
Woe to those who call good evil
And those who call evil good

The harlot and her wayward bastard
Protestant progeny
Nail messiahs to their doorposts
Penitence in a lottery
A shot of judas on the rocks
Bloody sacrificial juices
Wafers crunch like savior bones
Candles burn away excuses

I kneel before the guillotine
Victim to my own sedition
A shipwrecked captain on the rocks
Fleshed within human condition
I cannot make my own way home
These tithes will never cover rent
Spirit take me by the soul
Wind come fill this empty tent

Bloody up the holy waters
Water down the holy blood
Woe to those who call good evil
And those who call evil good

© John Kennan 4-5-21


Scheme xaxbxcdc efxfegxg HIDJ xeaebxxx xkbkxlxl HIDJ k
Poetic Form
Metre 1111010 010111 0101010 00101101 01010101 101010101 11000010 100100101 01001100 10101110 01111111 0101110 01001111 01010101 10110111 1110101 10101010 1010101 11111110 0111101 010001010 100100 1010111 100100 01110101 1001010 1011101 10101010 1101010 10111010 0110101 10110010 11011111 11110101 1011101 1111101 10101010 1010101 11111110 0111101 110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,145
Words 216
Sentences 1
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 8, 8, 4, 8, 8, 4, 1
Lines Amount 41
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 138
Words per stanza (avg) 31
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Submitted by rankstranger7 on May 24, 2021

Modified on March 10, 2023

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