Analysis of I knock the walls

GIDRAF MWANGI 1992 (Murang'a)



When life’s pressures overwhelm me
And there is no letup on the horizon
I knock the steam off the walls

When pain strangles my sense
And its intensity numbs me
I knock the walls for feeling

When despair’s tentacles engulf me
And squeeze me hope-dry
I knock the walls in surrender

When am gnawed by hunger
And the belly twisted in agony
I feebly knock the wall

When loneliness becomes unbearable
And there is no friend to turn to
I knock the walls for company

When frustrations build up too high
And the stress bloated
I knock the walls down

Wish I can knock my way to Hades
In blistering fists of fury
And find rest for eternity.

© GIDRAF MWANGI


Scheme AXX XAX ABC CAX XXA BXX XAA X
Poetic Form
Metre 1110011 0111110010 1101101 11111 01010011 1101110 101100011 01111 11010010 111110 0010100100 110101 1100010100 01111111 11011100 10101111 00110 11011 111111110 01001110 01110100 11
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 629
Words 121
Sentences 2
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 1
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 65
Words per stanza (avg) 15
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Modified on March 05, 2023

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