Analysis of Banging the evening famish!



An evening preluded by;
 A meager lunch meal,
 As though saving a dear bill,
 Amounting to millions!

A brief breakfast,
 As though we are in a fast,
Awaiting dear God for explanation;
‘’Assuredly we ate just a little!’’

A jingle of the money hold
A response heartbreaking
Alas! I have only twenty bob!
Aggrieving on the poverty, I use it all

A bunch of three ‘mandazis’
And a recently ripened avocado
A plastic bottle of clear water beside
Amounting to a delicious crescendo

Banging the evening famish!

© GIDRAF MWANGI


Scheme XXXA XXXX XXXX ABXB X X
Poetic Form
Metre 11011 01011 1110011 010110 0110 1111001 010111010 0100111010 01010101 00110 011110101 1101001111 01111 0010010010 01010111001 01010010010 100101 11
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 520
Words 91
Sentences 6
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 1, 1
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 68
Words per stanza (avg) 15
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Submitted by GIDRAF on May 15, 2021

Modified on May 01, 2023

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