Analysis of A blue morning



The morning was robbed of grace
Dreary and mucky it seemed
Thrill was a deficiency of the place
Diminishing the spirit to boring solitude

A yawn escaped my mouth
Of boredom and dullness
Aching ribs shook to and forth
Over-reacting me to near madness

Full of haste and surprise
I donned the school uniform
Fearing to miss the morning bus
Incidentally missing it, a fate so grim

My daddy, a rattle snake
Rattled my bones for the mistake
Maltreating me to a toil of cakes to bake
Raping my mood to a point of break

By the evening I was worn and tired
A state sporadic in my life
But it seemed a bad luck I had
A brush with malevolent fate

© GIDRAF MWANGI


Scheme AXAX XBXB XXBX CCCC XXXX X
Poetic Form
Metre 0101111 1001011 1100100101 010001011010 010111 110010 1011101 1001011110 111001 110110 10110101 01001010111 1100101 10111001 111011111 101110111 1010111010 01010011 11101111 01101001 11
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 638
Words 125
Sentences 1
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 87
Words per stanza (avg) 21
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Modified on March 05, 2023

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