Analysis of Discipline master



A twisted upper lip
A bite on the tongue
A forehead of wrinkles
A picture of gloom

A stick in a claw hand
Ragged and jagged on edge
Thrust back-forth ominously
A swish of a dark omen

Whack! Whish! Whash! Stick
Snap! Crack! Dark burns
Tears teeter on the eyes
Plonk! Plop! Of a teardrop

Tense immense in air
Agony crouches in vicinity
As one of our colleagues
Faces the crispy music

Snarling, sharply gazing
In fiery breath of dragon
Is the awful discipline master
An ugly hellish demon

© GIDRAF MWANGI


Scheme AXXX XBCD EXXA XCXE XDXD B
Poetic Form
Metre 010101 01101 010110 01011 010011 100111 1111000 0110110 1111 1111 110101 11101 10101 100100100 1111010 1001010 101010 01001110 101010010 1101010 11
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 489
Words 93
Sentences 9
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 67
Words per stanza (avg) 15
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Submitted by GIDRAF on May 14, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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