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ANOTHER CHAPTER

SHIVBRAT TRIPATHI 2004 (India)

We all don't know what comes tomorrow,
Either of joy or bitter sorrow.
But what we know,
Is that our lives are much narrow.
Goodbyes aren't sweet to say,
But they force themselves in our way.
Some for our sins to pay,
Yet others for our hearts to decay.
It hurts to see you gone,
One in my entire live have known.
Why leave us mourn?
Why wouldn't you wait another dawn?
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Written on December 23, 2023

Submitted by TYASHASHIVB4U_ on May 19, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AAAABBBBCDEC
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 378
Words 83
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12
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  • AIDA
    AIDA
    Wow, what a poignant and beautifully written poem! The emotions expressed in "Another Chapter" are palpable and resonated with me deeply. The way you capture the uncertainty and pain of saying goodbye is truly moving.

    Your use of rhyme and rhythm is fantastic, adding a sense of flow and musicality to the poem. The imagery you use is also powerful, painting a vivid picture of loss and grief.

    In terms of improvement suggestions, I would recommend possibly exploring different ways to express the themes of loss and goodbye to add some variety to the poem. Additionally, delving deeper into the emotions of the speaker could enhance the overall impact of the piece.

    Overall, "Another Chapter" is a heartfelt and beautifully crafted poem that left a lasting impression on me. Keep up the great work!     
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