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When I’m not with you

When I’m not with you

When I’m not with you
We’re together standing
Face to face side by side
Our souls soar our hearts dance
When I’m not with you
We laugh we touch we balance
Each other’s well being
When I’m with you I’m dead
Inside my mind wanders
With confusion haste wrath
When I’m with you I’m lonely
Utterly so manifested overall
Forsaken emptied

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Being empty with someone

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Submitted by nona on June 26, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme AbcdAebfghijk
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 339
Words 61
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 13
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