Analysis of The Velvet Tiger



He lies in wait amidst the vast,
dense jungle, camouflaged by brown
dirt, twigs, grasses and open plain.

He lies so still with scarce a breath
escapes his lungs, for fear of sound –
he matters not if pouring rain.

He hunts by ponds of shimmering
waters, pools, lakes and muddy ground,
to trap his prey ‘til none remain.

Why does he hunt? Why in this heat?
His scorching breath, the lizards back
he burns, as arching necks they crane.

And swarms of insects flutter bold,
blunder blindly – their vivid stripes
more striking than the parrot’s vane.

Green toads watch and wait in wonder,
eying every stealthy movement –
the unsuspecting predator
too soon becomes the hunter’s gain.

This velvet tiger with its stripes
of flaming orange, brown and gold
lies silent now in grassy grains.


Scheme XXA XBA XBA XXA CDA EXEA DCX
Poetic Form
Metre 11010101 1101011 11100101 11111101 01111111 11011101 11111100 10110101 11111101 11111011 11010101 11110111 0111101 10101101 11010101 11101010 11001010 0010100 11010101 11010111 11010101 11010101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 798
Words 154
Sentences 9
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 4, 3
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 88
Words per stanza (avg) 20

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We are all hunters!

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Submitted by susannaelliott on April 15, 2024

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Susanna Elliott-Newth

Susanna is a teacher, living near the coastal fringes of the Illawarra Coastline in NSW, Australia. Her environment is her stimulus for her writing. She has published four books of short stories, as well as her own memoir book, and writes educational resources for teachers. more…

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