Analysis of Belonging



On my way to work I reflect
on that sinking feeling
caused by rebuttal.
Harsh words, angry emotions
fuelled by personal perspective.
A bias perhaps – or a prejudice?
This residue remains
like stale ground dregs, dark and impervious.

Reflecting on my life’s purpose,
I’ve come to understand
the art of friendship.
Careless, callous temper
fuelled by selfishness and ego
play no part in Shakespeare’s Seven Stages
of Man’s theatrical journey.
Acts now done are now done,
leaving behind their sad corollary.

I’ll use the anaphora technique
to quell this errancy
and lighten ethos.
This pathos and poignancy
fuelled by aftermath and regret,
will leave, and leave me to pay the piper.
His tune I’ll value more –
his tune I’ll emulate –
his tune I’ll ameliorate.


Scheme XXXAXXXB BXXCXXDXD XAXDXCXEE
Poetic Form
Metre 11111101 111010 11010 1110010 101100010 0100110100 11001 1111100100 01011110 11101 01110 101010 101100010 111011010 11010010 111111 100111100 110010001 1111 01010 1100100 10110001 1101111010 111101 11110 111010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 780
Words 141
Sentences 10
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 8, 9, 9
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 201
Words per stanza (avg) 42

About this poem

I made a mistake and regretted the harsh words I had said to my friend.

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Submitted by susannaelliott on April 10, 2024

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Susanna Elliott-Newth

Susanna is a teacher, living near the coastal fringes of the Illawarra Coastline in NSW, Australia. Her environment is her stimulus for her writing. She has published four books of short stories, as well as her own memoir book, and writes educational resources for teachers. more…

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