Sleekwood's comments

Teardrops and rainfall and ink lots and grief

Keep going.

You have something.

Have re-read this for the first time since writing it.

Very mawkish.

Poorly written.

I think the sentiment has some good that shines through.

I shall rest,
with your permission.

I shall write,
with no contrition.

A moment’s pause,
a chance to think…
that tick’ling touch -
a call to drink.

So I shall rest
at the edge of tracks,

a chance to truly
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Don’t change a THING.

Beautiful.