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Great work! I love the different images of happiness shown in each stanza.

2 years ago

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This poem is relatable and I like the use of "heart" imagery. My only suggestion is to edit out the typos and grammar issues. I find that they remove me from the world of the poem. Other than that, great work! 

2 years ago

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