N0qlt's comments

I loved the deep nature of this work. I found the imagery very effective--I had to read it aloud to family. There are several great poems in this batch, and this is certainly one of them!

I loved the imagery in this poem.

I loved the imagery and simplicity of the poem. There were quite a few strong entries, but this one really resonated with me. I enjoyed the flow when I read it aloud. Excellent work!