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Very simple and easy to identify metaphors of what love feels and looks like. I love it!

I dream of a woman like this. The kisses on the face: I totally dig that!

So straightforward and simple. This poem rings true.

It amazes me how this poem speaks the truth about women we seldom know about or hear expressed. The real beauty of a woman comes from within. It’s kinda sad how most men don’t appreciate the inner part of a woman and just treat them so badly based on exterior designs. You inspire us men to see more and respect as well as cherish women as equals. more »

Wonderful and thought provoking poems. Feel free to write me anytime, Lindsay

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This poem reminds me so many times of how I stopped and took notice of the most simple form of beauty: a flower like a rose or a Lotus blossom. Every now and then the same feeling comes over me when I notice a beautiful woman. Even if I don’t know her name, there is something about her that shines beyond her physical beauty and reminds me that taking notice in itself is a very special moment like a miracle more »

Very deep emotional poem with an experience I can relate to. Great work!

thank you. It’s going into my 18th book of poems.

Nice poem. I can feel some of the emotions and relate to them.

Nice poem about the moon. I’m a selenophile too and I have written about the moon as well. I posted a poem titled Once In A Blue Moon.

Reminds me of the depths of depression I have experienced. Beautiful descriptions!

Very descriptive poem. Aside from the metaphors I almost felt like I had hopped aboard a sinking ship.

yes you are correct. I wrote it because I hurt my girlfriend and when I recognized how deep her pain was I felt very badly and knew I had to make amends. This poem helped me focus my regret into an apology in poetic form. She has forgiven me and I will learn not to be so hurtful with my words again. more »

thank you so much for the compliment and appreciation. I wrote this poem about my girlfriend and the love we share. She loved it. Glad you like it too!