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Thank you for sharing your own, knowledge & I am going to explore the readings you mention

3 years ago

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Very beautiful. Just remember, every day we all start with a blank page that we will have the choice of how that page will read in the chapters of the book of your life. How do you want the pages to read. You are in control. So as the days go by with your beautiful son, remember to be the good example he needs in his life. He will mirror you. Let him see a good reflection. Your choices in life is what he will see and learn. Much happiness to you with your baby boy. Vivian Timmins. P.S. I notice many parents will scream and yell scolding a child harshly not to do this not to do that. Keep in mind a child is not experienced in many things, so take the child and explain the reason you don't want him to do something. Such as I don't want you to throw your your toys at the window. It can break the glass and it could hurt one of us, and it costs me a lot of money. Id rather spend the money on us, so it does make things better when you listen to me. It makes things happen for you and me. This is a much more sensible way as opposed to," if you throw that toy at that window one more time, I'm going to give you a spanking you won't forget." The child just heard harsh words and yelling rather than knowing why he should not throw things at the window. Be a good example to your son. One he can respect. 

3 years ago

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I truly enjoyed reading this poem because the word TIME is my favorite word. More than a word, it's variety of meanings and phrases have so much significance in so many ways. I enjoyed his perspective on it. Thank you for your Time
Vivian Timmins 

3 years ago

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