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Field Of Daises brings back a feeling of nostalgia but then again so does all my poems that I write. It is about that first crush/love .I remember being a blooming daisy myself and would spend many a days just sitting while daydreaming and plucking petals off of daises while chanting he loves me he loves me not letting out a great sigh of releaf when down to the last petal it said yes . Lol its funny today looking back at it because now that Iam older and thus wiser I know that this is not how love works it takes time .You must be carefull in picking the right one and then plant the seed makeing sure to water it daily and give it plenty of light and then may your love grow in a field of daisies . 

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Field Of Daises brings on the feeling of nostalgia . This poem is about young love/that first crush . As a blooming daisy myself I remember a many days when I would sit plucking petals off of the daises and asking it if he loved me when down to the last petal I'd let out a great sigh of releaf when it had whispered yes ! Wow how foolish I was for now I know this is not how love really works .Like a daisy (you must carefully pick the right one ) you must first plant the seed and with a little watering and sunlight that love will grow into a field of daises. 

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A Candle So Bright is a beautifully written poem about yours truly .It is a symbolic symbol of my first true love /crush the one that to this very day has never gone out that flame still burns for thee like a candle inside 

3 years ago

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Tangled and twisted is what my mind becomes when I think of him .Sincerely your secret admirer.

3 years ago

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