The Loving Presence



In-spite of opinion to the contrary
Implying your none existence
I am aware of your presence,
A presence which is the source
Of my own presence.

Where I sit you share my presence,
A presence aware of your presence,
An awareness as real as the sun
Presently permeating
Our sitting room window.

Yes, a contemplative experience
As true as each day and each night
Or the use of the pen which produces
The contents of ‘The Loving Presence’.
Which contemplates what I cherish-
A gift beyond description.

Yes, my Lord, I am aware of your
Presence as I am aware of the pen
Which I am now composing with:
Therefore, I thank You!
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Submitted on July 24, 2018

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XAAXA AABXX AXXAXB XXXX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 605
Words 113
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 6, 4

Liam Ó Comáin

An Irish poet now living in Derry City but originally from Limavady in County Derry in the north of the Island. more…

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