Our Song



I am afraid to say some words
But I'm sure I should say a lot more
Open myself and drop my soul
God pick up my pieces, now I'll fly and roar
Creating  the song the rhyme
The silent, the peace the quiet time
Remembrance of moments
and Waves that kisses the edge of the sky
In my empty space the winds its comes  
spreads my roar over  the mountains,
over the clouds
I can't find my senses in these walls
that surrounds me day and night
I can't fly I can't see the sky
I can't find the words
Where's my hope ?
Where's my way?
In  silence waiting for the sound
I raise my arms and cry my pray
In calm and peace shall wait his say
Love and forgiveness fulfill
My empty space
I should keep going
Fly, trace my route into new dreams.
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Submitted on January 20, 2016

Modified on April 17, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCBDDEFGHIJKFALMNMMOPQR
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 717
Words 146
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 24

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