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Incompletion

Mya Edwards

Dont think you can Escape me
foR i am thE air with which you breathe
preSSing down down
you are nothIng
why are yOu loNely?
i am always here.

dont pretend to be hAppy
who do you thiNk you are?
i will make you eXplode
I can't breathE
or am i breathing Too much?
overwhelmed
whY cant i control myself?

today is a good day
i am as happy as can Be
good frIends good life good family
i hope you die
you are nothing
you will never know Peace
my emOtions are aLl over the plAce
isnt that hilaRious?

maybe theres nothing wrong with me
maybe its just you three.
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Submitted on December 10, 2015

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme abxCax axxbxxx xaaxCxxx aa
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 530
Words 111
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 6, 7, 8, 2
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