pause for thought...



copious comments styled within time
as copious people all stand in a line,
all frantic, wound as a ball of twine,
consuming each syllable

corperates and commoners mingled together,
each keep to the own and talk of the weather,
ones hands are soft, the others like leather
such is societies flaws

consider communities fraught with fear,
panic  ensues at the slight smell of beer,
being pauper or posh means nothing here
for everyone feels the same

for everyone speaks of anothers day,
for bordem ticking each second away,
not wanting to be the first to complain,
so it all gets left unsaid

till its time to pay for their bread......
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Submitted on August 24, 2015

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XAAX BBBX CCXX DDXE E
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 616
Words 110
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 1

Tina Lewis

born on 11 july 1985 in lichfield i found poetry in my teens at school. began writing my own at age 15 till i was about 20. now aged 30 i've began to write again, pause for thought being my first poem in 10 years, would love some feedback if at all possible more…

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