I need you, I want you



satisfy my hunger, satisfy my greed

satisfy my longing,  satisfy my need

satisfy my yearning, satisfy my desire

satisfy my craving, with your hose put out my fire

Take me to paradise, take me away

Take me to heaven, every single day

Feed me with your passion, feed me with your soul

Feed me with your fruit, feed me with your control

I need you to want me, I need you to be here

I need you to control me, for you are my puppeteer

Control me with your love, control me with your mind

control me however you want. I do not mind

For I am under your spell, and whatever you want i will give

For without you i am nothing, without you i do not want to live

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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme A A B B C C D D E E F F X X
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 645
Words 133
Stanzas 14
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1

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