Friend, without that Dark raptor

Mirabai 1498 (Kudki, Pali district, Jodhpur State) – 1556 (Dwaraka)



Friend, without that Dark raptor
I could not survive.
Mother-in-law shrills at me,
her daughter sneers,
the prince stumbles about in a permanent fury.
Now they've bolted my door
and mounted a guard.
But who could abandon a love
developed through uncounted lifetimes?
The Dark One is Mirabai's lord,
who else could
     slake her desire?

[Translated by Andrew Schelling]

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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme AXBXBXXXXXXA X
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 365
Words 61
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 12, 1

Mirabai

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