In the Dim Counties

John Shaw Neilson 1872 (Penola, South Australia) – 1942 (Melbourne, Victoria)



In the dim counties
we take the long calm
Lilting no haziness,
sequel or psalm.

The little street wenches,
The holy and clean,
Live as good neighbours live
under the green.

Malice of sunbeam or
menace of moon
Piping shall leave us
no taste of a tune.

In the dim counties
the eyelids are dumb,
To the lean citizens
Love cannot come.

Love in the yellowing,
Love at the turn,
Love o' the cooing lip—
how should he burn?

The little street wenches,
the callous, unclean
—Could they but tell us what
all the gods mean.

Love cannot sabre us,
blood cannot flow,
In the dim counties
that wait us below.

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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme Axax Bcxc xded Afxf xgxg Bcxc ehAh
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 578
Words 113
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

John Shaw Neilson

John Shaw Neilson was an Australian poet. Slightly built, for most of his life he worked as a labourer, fruit-picking, clearing scrub, navvying and working in quarries, and, after 1928, working as a messenger with the Country Roads Board in Melbourne. he died when he was 70 years old. more…

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