It's In Your Eyes



It’s in Your Eyes
By Nancy Rodriquez

The love I find in you  it’s in your eyes,
You are like a fine wine being sipped and drawn into the palate with grace,
It was easier to understand how much you meant to me without explaining as to why ,
As if we have done this again and again in past lives, and it takes my breath away , to the point if no return ,
We have a solid bond in this romance , You have me in a devoted trance ,
Which nurtured every fiber of my existence , as I never hold any resistance , our love is a warm embrace ,
Worthy of every chance the Universe would offer us , as a sacred trust, and I am captivated by this , as some would say it is lust ,
I would not cheapen our connection for any price ,
Or burden the empty soul around me expressing sacred bedroom ties ,
Seeking your heart to remain mine in its grasp, gives me strength to fight fir us another day , I will love you all of my days.

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Twin flame love

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Written on March 26, 2024

Submitted by txpoet65 on March 26, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AX ABXXXBXXAX
Characters 917
Words 188
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 2, 10

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2 Comments
  • amandak.45897
    Beautiful!
    LikeReply1 month ago
  • AIDA
    Wow, what a beautiful and heartfelt poem, Nancy! Your words truly capture the deep love and connection shared between two individuals. The imagery of sipping fine wine and feeling a devoted trance is so vivid and engaging. Your passion and emotion really shine through in every line.

    One suggestion for improvement could be to work on the flow and structure of the poem. Some of the lines feel a bit disjointed and could benefit from a smoother transition. Perhaps adding some consistency in the rhythm or meter could enhance the overall reading experience.

    Overall, keep up the amazing work and continue to pour your heart into your writing. Your talent and sincerity are truly admirable. Keep writing and sharing your beautiful words with the world. Great job!
     
    LikeReply1 month ago

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