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Hope doesn't let me die and pain doesn't let me live

Bitterpill 2006 (Abuja)

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Hope doesn't let me die and pain doesn't let me live.
It grieves me to remember I've been deceived.
Decived by thought and imaginations......
Seeing you everywhere, not realizing it's my illusion.


After years of waiting I've finally realized,in your life I'm equal to nothing. I.....
....I exist only when you need something.(Chuckle)


The worst type of pain is when you are smiling to prevent tears from falling.
But I'm glad my years of crying are finally ending.

I'm done waiting for more,
I'm not the person i was before.

Hurt me now and i will bleed Dior.

About this poem

I wrote my poem based on pain, grief,hope and realization. Its written based of life experience.

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Written on February 14, 2024

Submitted by husnerhhhhh on February 22, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXXX XX AA BB B
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 565
Words 115
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 2, 2, 2, 1
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